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Reviews For: Journey From Home

An Inside Joke
2008-02-18
ch 2,
abuseThere's a lot of charecters here, so it's hard to keep track of who's who. Besides that, though, you have a clear narrative, and it looks like you're setting up a definite arc.
An Inside Joke
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting way to open the story. The pacing seemed a bit quick, but I'm curious to see where you're going from here.
The MS Excursion
2008-02-15
ch 2,
abuseSad :(
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