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| oOredheadshortieOo 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was so cute and sweet! Is there going to be more? |
| Lady D'Arque 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseIs this a one shot story or will there be more? I loved how you made the teenagers act like TEENAGERS. "DUDE!" and all that stuff. Its a pretty funny piece. At first when I read reading their dialogue I thought she was flirting with him-- and I was surprised he didn't pick it up. Hahaha. I was hoping there was a chapter two... maybe sumtime in the future? (wink wink hint hint) And thanks for the review back there. I really appreciate it. Hope we stay in touch so you can see how my story progresses |
| MysteriousSmile43 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseGood Brandon God why can't guys realize these things? Great job...ha every line started w/g |
| DramaQueenMaureen 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was sweet. Even though I hate Valentines Day. Billy was my valentine at play practice! :) |
| Gemma Lovell 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was cute! You have a couple grammar issues, but other than that is great. Nice job!! ~Gemma |