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Reviews For: Will He Ever Be My Valentine?

oOredheadshortieOo
2008-03-29
ch 1,
abuseThat was so cute and sweet! Is there going to be more?
Lady D'Arque
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseIs this a one shot story or will there be more?

I loved how you made the teenagers act like TEENAGERS. "DUDE!" and all that stuff. Its a pretty funny piece. At first when I read reading their dialogue I thought she was flirting with him-- and I was surprised he didn't pick it up. Hahaha.

I was hoping there was a chapter two... maybe sumtime in the future? (wink wink hint hint)

And thanks for the review back there. I really appreciate it. Hope we stay in touch so you can see how my story progresses
MysteriousSmile43
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseGood Brandon
God why can't guys realize these things?
Great job...ha every line started w/g
DramaQueenMaureen
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abuseAww, that was sweet. Even though I hate Valentines Day. Billy was my valentine at play practice! :)
Gemma Lovell
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was cute! You have a couple grammar issues, but other than that is great. Nice job!!
~Gemma
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