This was simply breathtaking. Really exquisite writing. Such a unique style.

~the Stranger in the moonlight

I LOVE THIS PIECE! I REALLY WANT SOMEONE TO LOVE ME ENOUGH TO WRITE ME A LOVE POEM!
CHEERS!

nice poem. vocabulary is beyond wat a 15yr old should know.
whos laura? u sound like u lov her

the images in the piece are really great and it's very sweet... great job

wow. that is all i can really say...you're really good! have you read her this poem? i mean it is so awasoem and...just...wow. great job! nice similes, omg kepp it up!

Haven't heard from you in a while. This is amazing, as always. This girl means the world to you, I can tell. very, very nice poem. Discriptive, emotional, passionate, I got goosebumps. Marvelous. Great work. Keep writing.

WOW! Amazing, as usual! I love it! Just awesome word choice and description... It paints a picture in my mind very clearly. Love the line, "Her eyes carve my heart, etched with her name; Laura". Great job! Keep it up!
--Katrina