U GUNNA CONTINUE?

Cute. A tad choppy though. Too much dialogue.

Interesting concept. Original.

You always find a way to hook me into your stories. You have amazing talent and I hope it takes you somewhere in life :)

As for Amos, it's lovely. I'm not going to say "OMG! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!" However, an update would be quite nice ;D

-Sincerely,
F. Fran

aww :(
wait though, does Glen have a gf named sam?
PLEASE UPDATE!

again, Glen is so cute!!
PLEASE UPDATE!

aw so cutee :)

haha. i like the sound of this :D

So cute. I like it. You just have to proofread because there are technical errors, not too bad, but noticeable. But this is really great. I wonder what'll happen next...update soon!

Cool story. =)

-- Tied-Up Dog

So unusual, im actually intrigued with the whole concept of the plot. Hope you write longer chapters =D I'll be waiting to see more from you

wow this is so cool please update soon!

Now I'm confused. Is Glen her age or younger? Cause if he is younger, then I'm happy, but if not, then your summary is misleading. BTW, your descriptions are great. Update soon!

It kinda ruins the whole "Oh my gosh he's a whole freaking three years younger than me!" deal if he's not really that young. Just saying. But it's still good. I hope you update soon!

Okay, you keep talking about Glen, so he's obviously important, but he's not Amos. With "Amos" and Glen compete for her attention? Oh, that would be interesting. I hope you update soon!