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| Harmony'sSake 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseThat is a great poem. It's the perfect length and it definitely conveys a lot of meaning. The words flow together great and it was just..great. I really don't have any critism for it. It could do with some punctuation, which might make it sound better read allowed, but I think it's fine without it. Great job! -Harmony |
| lookin4nemo 2008-02-16 ch 1, | abuseoh! this is so awasome! my fav line is we were so young the...and the other lines too great job! ~ur cuz~ |
| Phoebe Dake 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem. It kind of relates to a friendship of mine... Your poem sends so much emotion and feeling. |
| Lurid Black 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI like that all of your poems are unique, and aren't generic to many others, this is great, rhymes/structure/words chosen are amazing... keep writing |