this is disturbing,
in a good (intentional) way
it's moving

nicely done!!

Fantastic and jarring. Really dark and despairing but I really like it. A sort of dangerous tint to look through which makes it very appealing.

~the Stranger in the moonlight

One word...badass

Hahaha! Thank you for reviewing! Just like Billie.Joelle, I feel honored as well. You write so amazingly!I am very fond of this poem--so descriptive and detailed...you create very strong and beautiful imageries; they emit a very eerie ambiance indeed... ~~Ordineerie

the images are really powerful... I love the lines "placid, impelling around me/amethyst, ablaze in my trance"

very sad and powerful ending... awesome piece

I feel honored to get a review by you, you are one of the best poets on this site. I don't even know what to say, this is just amazing. I love how you bolded certain words, it makes the poem just that much more emotional. Good job, keep writing!

Awesomazing! ;) But seriously- I love this. Love the words in bold, and I love the line, "This chimera of thoughts". As always, great imagery! I can relate...
--Katrina

wow! i really like this one! probably one of my favs! keep it up! i can relate!

It's an excellent poem, lovie, but I don't think it was necessary to type in bold print.