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sleeplessblue 2/16/08 . chapter 1aw, this reminds me of me, a little. I like this line: "I don't know how fix the ideas springing to my mind" I just have a little critique/advice. Try breaking those long lines in half. And with this line: "notebook's last page is blank I mean, can you write something for me?" I think it would be interpreted the way you want without the explanation after "is blank". And it should begin with "The" Some thought-provoking stuff :) Good work! |