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Reviews For: Digging
blackr0se64 2005-10-22 . chapter 1
I really liked that. You have talent. I liked the way that you told the reader his name without saying "his name was". Great job.
noche 2004-06-21 . chapter 1
I knew it was Tommy! But did he know it was his mother?
carmice3 2004-02-02 . chapter 1
Robbing a grave robber. And the son thing. You do have a whole sack full of good ideas don't you?
Unfortunately I don't like this one. It needs work. Maybe alternate paragraphs about the father and son, as they each go about their nefarious business, without mentioning their relationship until the end.
Willum 2001-04-11 . chapter 1
A nice turn of events there, Deacon.
aznangl627 (signed in) 2001-04-09 . chapter 1
ooOoooOoOOooOoOo.. ilyked dat! i kindah sortah expekted it... but i shtil lyked it!
Isabelle 2001-04-07 . chapter 1
oooooooooooooh that was creepy, but in a really well-written way. good job! clearly you're a very talented author. keep it up.
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