This is a very interesting story. I read it because I liked the title and description but I am definitely glad that I did. I'd stick around for another chapter.

Perhaps if you have the time, you'll read some of my works sometime.

I like this story, it's very well thought out and for some reason I really like Ruki's smoke break, haha. I don't smoke but it sounds a lot like most of my friends who do.

I also like the Japanese honorific titles, it really makes the story seem like an authentic manga.

Also, I dunno if you intended this, but there seems to be a subtle aura of tension in the air that adds to the story- as though everyone knows inevitably something is going to take place, but doesn't know when.

I'd definitely read if you posted a new chapter ^_^.