Reviews for We Never Said Goodbye

Lurid Black 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseGreat... 'Melt into this grey' good line... I look for them in amazing poems
simpleplan13 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseI like this piece.. it's very bittersweet and relateable There was one line I didn't like..."So many words left silent" left silent seems odd.. kept silent fits better.. I know you use kept in the next line, but you could change it to stay hidden.. just a thought The line I love is "Melt into this grey" and the ocean metaphor was really beautiful PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile
Dreaming Chica 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseWow that was a powerful poem. You could feel the sad emotion in it, Well done. Beauitfully written ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
Solstice Of Light 2008-02-17 ch 1,	abuseShort, but gets across the idea :) "lost in ocean depths" perhaps would fit the rhythm better :) Good, as always. SoL
Harmony'sSake 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this and I can definitely relate to it. The words flowed great and it held a lot of meaning. The only thing I would suggest is adding some punctuation, such as commas, to it. -Harmony