Reviews for Just Like You - FictionPress.com

angel953 2008-02-22 ch 1,	abuseI know poeple like this...and I say these same things to myself every day. I think there are probably a lot of people who can relate to this. Nice work! ~angel953
Daughter of the Faeries 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseThis was pretty interesting, especially since I'm one of those people that always seems to be happy. It was good, too, but sometimes the rhyme was a little forced. The rhyme was also probably the reason that some stanzas seemed disjointed. For instance the last line of the second stanza is "if he'll ever be in your youth?". It made some sense, but threw me off when I first read it. You also used the word "ponder" twice, and in my experience, it is one of those words that people just try to use to sound smarter. Try using more common words that fit with the style of the rest of the poem so that it flows better. On the whole, I really liked it. Keep up the great work!
Luminaerie 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseI think it flowed really well! It was excellent! I wish I could write poetry as good as you do lol. Great job!