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| aimee kate 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. It's unique and fresh. Have you ever been compared to T.S. Eliot before? You remind me of him. Very nice. |
| killer syntax 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abusei absolutely love the short, ironic (again, lack of a better description) bursts in your poetry. the imagery created is so gripping. awesome job! |
| elemental writer 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseI rather enjoy the rhymes. They're fluid, not forced. The imagery, though, is my favorite. The last three lines make this piece for me. |
| Jon Blue 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abusedang...I wrote somethin similar about exhalin fire... GET OUTTA MY HEAD! anyway that was good, rhyme really works here, it's short and excellent. |
| SheridanSpence 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseI'm not at all religious, but I actually really like this poem. The last two lines are great! |