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Reviews For: I BREATHE FIRE

aimee kate
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseI loved it. It's unique and fresh. Have you ever been compared to T.S. Eliot before? You remind me of him. Very nice.
killer syntax
2008-03-18
ch 1,
abusei absolutely love the short, ironic (again, lack of a better description) bursts in your poetry. the imagery created is so gripping. awesome job!
elemental writer
2008-02-17
ch 1,
abuseI rather enjoy the rhymes. They're fluid, not forced. The imagery, though, is my favorite. The last three lines make this piece for me.
Jon Blue
2008-02-17
ch 1,
abusedang...I wrote somethin similar about exhalin fire...
GET OUTTA MY HEAD!

anyway that was good, rhyme really works here, it's short and excellent.
SheridanSpence
2008-02-17
ch 1,
abuseI'm not at all religious, but I actually really like this poem. The last two lines are great!
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