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| fairytale failure 2008-02-16 ch 1,  | abuseunnh, heartbreaking from the second line...you know it was stupid, but still, it feels nice to be tricking yourself, doesn't it? Sometimes it hurts too much to face the truth at the time - you expressed that really well in the third stanza. "But does it count as a lie, if you thought it was the truth at the time?" the feeling of confusion, swirling thoughts, was really powerful in the last two stanzas. |