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| xxopticaldelusions 2008-03-17 ch 1,  | abuse[ review game ] I like the fact that the entire poem just flows so effortlessly and each line is just right. I also like the underlined and bold "hurt" -- it emphasizes it a lot more and jumps off the page when you read it. Oh & I love this line: "Is our grip against the world, Finally going astray." Great job! |
| nora-11 2008-03-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is AMAZING. I really liked it, no wait, I LOVED it! |