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Ember Shadows 2009-07-20 . chapter 1
LMAO Ohgod that made my day XD
Pinnacle of Pan 2009-07-06 . chapter 1
That was just about the funniest thing I've ever read. I especially liked the ending lines.
rose-by-anyothername 2009-05-17 . chapter 1
...*giggles* XD I love, love, love it. Definitely unique. Can't say I ever read a tomato love story before. And I'll never, EVER look at a tomato the same way again...

And the ending? Priceless. XD "Hot, hot tomato sex". Oh goodness.
stick and straw 2009-04-25 . chapter 1
I vote both the hot tomato sex and their love...for what it's worth XD

I...love you. The only thing that would have made me love this more would be if you had somehow managed to write out the tomato sex...because really, I would have loved to see someone accomplish that XD

tomato pron. Hell, tomato romance.

You are awesome.

Rule #64. (Hope that's the right rule-_-) it rules the interwebs...
InsomniaticFrenchToast 2009-02-03 . chapter 1
o.o am i odd for enjoying that...
KD 2008-11-21 . chapter 1
"I'm cute. You're cute. What more do you need to know?"
Caspian is adorable!! So is Marzano. This was so sweet. Almost sickeningly so. :)
kauri-blume 2008-10-29 . chapter 1
OMG new fave story!!

xx :D

btw pmsl
Ain't.gonna.take.me.alive 2008-10-02 . chapter 1
I will never be able to eat another tomato again. Thank you very much! It was cute and origianl. I can just imagine the broccli's having a laughing fit over this. (hahahaha...haha?..ha? No, well I thought it was funny)

Alex
Lucy 2008-08-04 . chapter 1
*snickersnort* Best thing ever. Ten out of ten, and much love for you.
Wittyilynamed 2008-07-29 . chapter 1
This was so weird! I loved it! Of course, I ruined it a bit by thinking
"How the hell do they have sex? How do they eat? Tomato boys can have babies together?"

I tend to overthink things. xP Anyway, I loved this and the Witch King (which you need to update immediantly for my reading pleasure! XD) I love the way you write. I haven't found a good one like you in awhile.
Very Serious 2008-07-23 . chapter 1
You're my hero. This seriously made my day. You have real talent.
Howling Cat 2008-06-12 . chapter 1
This is seriously the best story ever.

I almost died laughing when Caspian came in, and now I adore your writing.

And that's it.
Sasquatch 2008-05-07 . chapter 1
Wierdest, most messed up, but adorable story I've ever read. I Like It~
goldxleaves 2008-03-14 . chapter 1
-yepp I'm to lazy to log in...-
about the story;
it.was.so.**.funny.
no seriously, The next time I'll eat a tomato, I'll name it Marzano the tomato (hey it rhymes :P)
still giggleing,
gold x leaves
Alaire 2008-03-07 . chapter 1
Whoa...hot tomato action! lolz. I have never thought tomatoes can do things. No wonder I didn't like to eat tomatoes. I know they have a voice! Lolz! Cute story, simple. Love it. =)
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