applause.

this is phenomenal.

I have a friend who is anorexic so this poem really got to me. Its all true, every one just kind of minds their own business until its too late. Good job.

This is one of the most amazing things that you have ever written. I am insanely jealous of your writing skills.

Wow, very powerful. I love the way you followed her descent. 5 gold stars XDD

I liked the point you were trying to get across...But after reading it I know you could have written better.

Oh wow. I love it!

I don't really know what to say... it's amazing :]

I loved how you changed the words in each chorus, so it was tracking her descent into bulimia. And it was so sad to see the last one in past tense.

But in a good way, for you. Lol.

This can be a hard subject matter to write about without seeming cliché or unrealistic. The way you wrote this is amazing, and... wow, I don't even know what to say. I love it.

*favorites*

k.X

Wow, oh my goodness, that was incredible! I love the lines "And they'll say 'slim' to her face/And 'skinny' behind her back" and how you changed it every chorus. This was incredible. great job

This deffinately shows the truth to bulimia.