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| A Touch of Insanity 2008-08-17 ch 15, | abuseARGH! FREAKIN UPDATE! That was rather piratey of me, but still. UPDATE! AIE! OK, exclamations over now. Poor Brandt! He's so much cooler than Kent! Oh, are you still going out wit Stefan? One of my friends knows him and I told her I thought you were dating him. So, are you? Well, I'll see you at school soon! H's and K's! |
| ProphecyGirlSBN 2008-08-16 ch 15, | abuseOMG! That little jerk! I hate Kent! What a sickening idiot! I like Brandt much better. Does Ray forgive Brandon? |
| blue 2008-08-14 ch 15, anon. | abuseif u don't finish i am going to hurt u... u are so good..keep up the good work... |
| Lynn-Night 2008-08-13 ch 15, | abuseGood job! Update soon! |
| Just Me 2008-08-13 ch 15, anon. | abuseWow. drama, drama. I don't like this Kent guy. He's a dick. Anywho, quick question...did you get the name La Fonda from the movie Napolean Dynamite?? Cuz there is a girl in that movie named La fawnda (or however you spell it). Anyway, I thought it was funny. |
| TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-08-13 ch 15, | abusei've missed you!! did you have a good time in Florida? oh, and i think that La Fonda is pretty much a family owned thing. like, only here in town. but i'm not really sure. oh, also, are the people aware of the magical swords they have?? oh, and great boyfriend choice Ray. Choose the druggie. not the amazingly hot sounding guy. whatever **! love the transvestiteism. i was watching Shark Tales with my sister the other day, and they were like "why is a shark dressed up like a dolphin?" and i was like "cough transvestite cough" heehee! it was funny! |
| May 2008-08-05 ch 14, anon. | abuseThis is good. It's about time he finds out that she is a girl. I just wish that we could find out more about Ray and her ex so that we can understand why she loved him so much but it's just me being impatient. Hahaha...I can't wait to see the next chapters. |
| TheHolyFukinBible!!! 2008-08-05 ch 14, anon. | abuseWOW! I'm glad you MADE me read that! It was the best thing I've ever read! Hurry up and update cause i cant wait to read more! |
| obsessivecompulsivehobbit 2008-07-31 ch 14, anon. | abuseAh Kent, the super douche! What will he add to the story next, I wonder... I'm really glad that Brandt knows that Ray is a girl now. Him struggling with his sexuality, was getting a little tired. And I'm starting to wonder just a bit whether some of the comments your characters make, are a little too graphic to be comfortably within the T category. I'm only just saying though, you can make of that what you will. Anywho! I just really don't know what to expect anymore, I'm soo curious to find out what'll happen next! I think I'd like to see more fighting... Okay, that's enough of my ramblings, I gotta get to university soon. Am I your first updater? Your 5th? I just hope you get the 5 and do it soon so I can read another chapter! Until then. =) |
| A Touch of Insanity 2008-07-30 ch 14, | abuseYou have to update! OMG! Brandt found out about Ray! Is he going to tell her? You must update! EP! |
| ValuedOpinion 2008-07-29 ch 14, | abusee! omg, he finally found out. I hope something happens between them soon. I love this story, I just wish you would update more frequently, because by the time you update the newest chapter, I've already forgotten everything, and have to read the previous chapter again. Anyway, I'd also really love to see some more Christian/Adam action. I haven't heard much from them lately ;) PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D |
| anxious reader 2008-07-24 ch 14, anon. | abuseahh! there are five reviews! why hasn't there been an update! |
| ducknamedchester 2008-07-24 ch 14, anon. | abuseso i absoutley love this story please please please update soon |
| fpfan 2008-07-23 ch 14, anon. | abuseahjh! update |
| Michelle 2008-07-22 ch 14, anon. | abuseohh, I believe this is the sixth review, I just started in on you story and it is awesome...Please! please! PlEaSe put up the next chapter soon? Michelle |