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| Eeliahs 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abusehahaha, I stumbled onto your profile while i was going through some of my old summary reviews and i thought i could return the favour. First of all the hog-tying was so unbelievably random in the most fantastic laugh-out-loud way, warrens reaction was priceless, and the amnesia has really grabbed me into the story. And i get the "we're pregnant" couple line, so true. Great start i'll be sure to stay tuned. :) Eeliahs |
| Euphorialie 2008-07-03 ch 17, | abuseHa, the end was funny. I like her sister, despite her bitchiness. And YAY, Anna's starting to forgive Warren! I wonder if Dawn will tell her that the TV's from Warren...hm. Anyway, great chapter! |
| Lady of Secrets 2008-07-02 ch 17, | abuselol! did u just call my baby fat? perfect timing. great job so far. sounds very realistic. update soon. -Salem |
| Sixkiller 2008-07-02 ch 17, | abuseI like Anna's mom! lol I have this stupid smile on my face, Anna loves Warren ~ I can't wait for the next chapter!! |
| Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-07-02 ch 17, | abuseNice ending there to that chapter, and nice description of Anna and her mother. I am liking it! ~Lillie |
| Euphorialie 2008-06-24 ch 16, | abuseAnd things get even more complicated...poor Anna, she's probably so confused. I laughed so hard at her Warren burning in hell comments. So nice chapter, even though they were separated. :) Can't wait for another! |
| Lady Macbeth's Murderer 2008-06-24 ch 16, | abuseMy review on the overall story: You built up the characters of Anna and Darren very well, and then you developed them even better, making them very human even if sometimes your style of writing lacked something. You're characters all have very sensible reactions and the stroy is obviously well thought about, and I especially like the part about Dawn as an extra complimacation. Very good last chapters, showing sibling rivalry as well as love. I love the story and I hope you'll update soon! ~Lillie |
| Sixkiller 2008-06-21 ch 16, | abuseI like Mr. Myer ~ He's almost as funny as Mr. O’Conner! XD I hope Warren can figure out some way to make everything up to Anna... and I hope she'll forgive him! *crosses fingers* I'm loving this story btw! |
| Petals of Paranoia 2008-06-19 ch 16, | abuseHaha that last part of the chapter was really funny. Seems like Anna is in denial now about Dawn. I can't wait to see what Warren plans on doing about Anna! |
| Lady of Secrets 2008-06-15 ch 15, | abuselol...that old man is a couple sandwiches short of a picnic. Anyway, I feel bad for Warren but I understand Anna's reaction. I can really see Warren change and grow, so congrats on that. Cant wait to read more, as always. -Salem |
| Euphorialie 2008-06-12 ch 15, | abuseAw, sad. I totally didn't expect Anna's reaction. I thought she'd at least let him explain a little. Sigh, I guess this makes sense though, since Warren WAS using and lying to her. Now I can't wait to find out how this is going to fix itself, cause it can't just end with them apart. So great, though depressing, chapter! Can't wait for them to make up. |
| Sixkiller 2008-06-11 ch 15, | abuseWhat a sad chapter! I feel for both characters -_- But I'm glad to see Mr. O’Conner back! lol |
| Petals of Paranoia 2008-06-11 ch 15, | abuseAw, how sad. Well, Anna handled that a lot better than I thought she would. I thought she would snap and start attacking him or something. Poor Warren. When exactly did he realize he was in love with Anna? That seemed kind of sudden to me. |
| Petals of Paranoia 2008-06-10 ch 14, | abuseOh, I can't wait to see what Anna's going to do next. I can't believe neither Dawn or Warren realized they'd left that there. And I loved this chapter because everything David says just makes me crack up. |
| Lady of Secrets 2008-06-02 ch 14, | abuseo someone's busted!!-Salem |