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Reviews For:
Rain In Spring
The Masta Writa
2008-02-17 . chapter 1
I particularly enjoyed the last four lines.
The lightening giving the earth a glow is really quite beautiful,
and I love how the last two lines seem to just flow out of that statement.
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