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| Hoodwynk 2008-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseI like it as a whole, but the word, 'speckled' really stands out to me. Does it symbolize imperfection, individualism, mortality, sin? So many possibilities... |
| Ygg 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThe last line is striking and makes you ponder about the true meaning of Harmony. I love the dynamic of the second line, "souls rustle with earth's rhythm", as if everything is continuously dancing, resonating with each other, even though we cannot really see it on the surface. Excellent poem again! |