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ilovevampires2 2008-02-17 . chapter 1
wow. that's really good. another excellent poem!
The Postscript 2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Wonderful. I could really relate to the lines "And who are you to say? That I can't live for the rest of the day/I am happy as I am, but thy made me a miser". It's something I've been struggling with; so rarely being happy, and yet when I am, it seems as though life doesn't want me to be, or, at the very least, I am so unaccustomed to the feeling that it takes a life of its own. Anyway, I don't know if I'm making any sense at all, but your poem presented some interesting thoughts on what it means to be an idividual with individual emotions and thouoghts, and yet at the same time be a member of society ... great write, keep writing, k.
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