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| PotterBoy90 2008-08-09 ch 1,  | abuseYou know, this is the first item of yours that I read. I like it... and I must say, I do quite like it. |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI like this.. it flows well and it's really quite adorable... In the first stanza I love the second line.. the rest of it kinda confused me.. i couldn't figure out what those questions had to do with love... The second stanza was really great... I love how you used the first line of each stanza to tie them together... I wasn't sure why you had a / at the end of the third line though... The last stanza was my favorite it tied the other two together nicely and the ending was so sweet PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile |
| kloun mannequin 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abusethe last line is just amazing, it's like a little story and it's heartfelt. |
| hey maria 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI really like the structure of this, and the ending is perfect. Nice work. Oh, I was reading your profile -- you were born 2/28/92? I was born 2/29/92. :) |
| BreadandtheButterfly 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I really enjoyed that. Yes, I do have a way with words, don't I? Hehe... Really deep, I read it about five times over and got something new each time! Very nice! |