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| flea writer 2008-02-18 ch 1, | i really enjoyed this one! probably my favorite out of your poems :) although i had one question, did you mean it to read, "... swaying fields of wheat with the colour..." or "...swaying fields of wheat the colour..."? just wondering :) |
| wrapped-in-porcelain 2008-02-17 ch 1, | I've never heard of a jorio. I read the definition on your profile and was intrigued by it. You've managed to feed my curiosity and so I will look further into this style. I enjoyed the natural aspect portrayed in this piece. The image was beautiful and serene. nicely done. x |