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Reviews For: A Moving Sound

flea writer
2008-02-18
ch 1,
i really enjoyed this one! probably my favorite out of your poems :) although i had one question, did you mean it to read, "... swaying fields of wheat with the colour..." or "...swaying fields of wheat the colour..."? just wondering :)
wrapped-in-porcelain
2008-02-17
ch 1,
I've never heard of a jorio. I read the definition on your profile and was intrigued by it. You've managed to feed my curiosity and so I will look further into this style.
I enjoyed the natural aspect portrayed in this piece. The image was beautiful and serene.
nicely done.

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