I hope everything works out for you. As usual, great job at expressing your feelings.

~Twilight Starr~

Aww!.
Nothing more to say.
Good job.
keep writing.

Keep your head high. *-- =]

I like this... it's very bittersweet and I like how you put that one track in italics

The only thing is it kinda left me wanting more... like I didn't totally understand the situation and I wanted to..

but other than that it's a great piece


PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon... there's a link in my profile

Sometimes there's too many things out of our control. That's life. Maybe we should learn to let go. Anyway cool. Stay.. :)

Me and STIX went through the exact same thing a few months ago. It was the first real fight I'd ever had with her.
I love her more than anything though. And we figured it out.

That's how love works. No matter what kind of love it is.
At least, that's how it's supposed to be...

Really good poem. As always, I love the rhyming.
--pockets

=]
good luck.
[not good lick]

Favorite.

I usually leave a comment or two
But I cant say anything new to you
So anyway heres a review!
(and it rhymes! Im so proud!)