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| explosion of planes 2008-03-01 ch 1,  | abusei wish i knew sign langange someday and everything seems to be reminding me of hello by evanescence & & beautifulbeautiful. (i really do suck at reviews.) |
| doctor's diagnosis 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI like this, but I think the last stanza isn't really necesary. It would end much stronger in my opinion if you just ended it at "that loves what's left of me". |
| rust phoenix 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abusePretty. I like your descriptions and the emotion in this, some interesting juxtaposition. Your poetry keeps getting better. And congratulations on writing 154 things. I know this is kind of a random number to congratulate you on, but I just saw how much you wrote and it feels like it's deserving of being congratulated. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem. Very interesting. Nice work. Have a fantastic day. ~Twilight Starr~ |