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| A Healing Heart 2008-06-19 ch 1,   | I loved the whole thing except for putting 'part' and 'apart' in lines right next to each other. it messes up the rythm of the the whole poem. but from there on it got better. But this, and like all your other work, i loved it and i think you did a good job on it. sincerely, autumn |
| birdsfly 2008-02-17 ch 1, | IT was pritty good. I liked it alot |