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Reviews For: Lemon Drop Elementary

theV
2008-03-07
ch 5,
abuseA typical science class! A doughnut for sleeping in class? Does he want Baillie to get fat and sleep more? Was Richard in class as well? I bet he was listening with intense interest?
EmilyFaerber
2008-03-03
ch 4,
abuseThat was thoroughly amusing! I especially liked the way it started, with the song lyrics and SLAM! ^^

You know what? I actually nicknamed someone I know Smugly because he was smelly and ugly. The nicknames you gave the characters in this story reminded me of that, so I had to laugh.
theV
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abusevery funny. many vivid details. cannot wait for chapter 3.
mr. qwert
2008-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseWTF?
You call this humor?!?!?
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