That was really good. I could hear the character's thoughts so cleary as if she was speaking directly to me. Really cool, I enjoyed reading it.

You pulled the story off well, lovie. Good job.

konban wa

Ouch. Such raw emotions are so vivid and poignant here. I loved it. I loved the heartwrenching part where she practically begs for love: "...you'll still love me for who I am." And the ending was so sudden it was brilliant - a perfect way to end. Kudos.

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-Shan-