Reviews for To Think I Once Thought

DreamWeaver010
2008-02-19
ch 1,

abuseHey, Kenna--depressed or something? It's obviously a heart-felt poem. My suggestion to you would be to remove all of the "to think I once thought"s except for the ones at the beginning of each stanza (I kept getting snarred on repeating myself while reading.) But other than that, it's pretty good in a down-to-earth way.

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