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| a beginner 2008-08-01 ch 1, | abuseits ended? well i liked it, cud have continue but ur the boss... keep rocking |
| RoseLife 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseaww cuute! i think someone has a lil crush ^^ well done! :D |
| d666lisa 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseGood story, I like the fact that they never really "got together." |
| Venus Smurf1 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this, though I was admittedly surprised when it just kind of ended. Are you planning to continue this? I didn't feel like it was over, though maybe that's what you were going for. Still, very funny. |
| MuseofMagic 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseOne - Black hair + green eyes = love. Two - very funny so far. I love the opening lines most. The part about superheros and such. "Red and Blue. Black." Those do seem to be common superhero colors haha. Superheros... *snorts* Anyway, I hope you write more soon! |
| justalilcrazy 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abusehey hey hey!!...looks VERY interesting so fa...honestly, I will be keeping my eye out for the next chapter!..which will be when exactly? |
| nikita 2008-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseOH MY GOD! you absolutely HAVE to continue this! if you don't you are depriving readers everywhere! and you don't want that do you? so write more on this story!! please? or you might, mysteriously, get nightmares of little faceless children running to you and begging for a story!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!so yeah! my point has been proved! |
| kIlL yOu FoR a KlOnDiKe BaR 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHA! TOO Y BAD!?!?!? NO.NEVER.Will too long of a chapter/story/triligy/note/or ANYTHING! will be too long!...i LOVED IT! UPDATE NOW!...no, not after you finish reading,and reviewing all your reviews...but NOW! GO GO GO!. . .NOW!have a brownie when your done!-Chelsea |
| EraseTheMemories 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this so far. Keep it up :) |
| You know who again 2008-03-06 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha I'm starting to sound slightly stalker-ish. Really, really, really, really liked this one. It was funny and serious at the same time. Great story really. The whole super hero thing was really funny too. |
| DSLuverGurl123 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseTwo or three chapters isn't a one-shot. lol -Katherine |
| incandescente 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abusePersonally, I dont know how much I'd like a guy who's so obesessed over Spiderman. That's kinda.. not attractive in my book. Haha nevertheless, you had an interesting take on the usual spin of teenage romance Kudos for that! I was just wondering how the hell Tiffany had to do detention even when she wasn't from that school? It doesn't make much sense. A line or two to suggest that the school boards don't care about her being in another school and wants to teach a lesson would have been helpful in shedding some light about her predicament. :) |
| XxFallenxX 2008-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseGosh, I love it. Though personally, my favorite was Batman. |
| Riley Hunter 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuse:) nice one-shot beginning :) |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI love this. I laughed the entire time. haha. Update soon! |