I think there is a story that goes along with this... isn't there?

Wow. This is just amazing!

WOW

I wish could read more from this two characters.

Aaw, I wish you wouldn't let this rot on your hard drive. It's really good.

I like the format a lot, with the parenthesis and the dashes. Nicely done!

This would be better with some more length.

Very powerful and short and sweet. I loved it

Ah, beautiful. This really touched me.

Wow, that was beautiful. I wish it was longer because I feel like it has a lot of potential to be a great, intense, poignant story. I really hope this becomes something more.

gah. this SHOULD be longer. i think if you expand on the idea, you'll really get something.

because right now, it's just a tease. and a really good one at that. love the ending.

beautiful work, as always.

Oh, very poetic and bittersweet. I really like it, nice work

IL2

This is really cool ]

I know, that sounds kind of lame, but it is cool P

The repetition of "i hate you" makes this so intense.

k.X

Hmn. It was interesting enough for me to want it to be longer.