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Very impressed 2009-10-20 . chapter 1
WOW
Dawn Bonaparte 2009-01-31 . chapter 1
I wish could read more from this two characters.
Slightly Ajar 2008-10-18 . chapter 1
Aaw, I wish you wouldn't let this rot on your hard drive. It's really good.

I like the format a lot, with the parenthesis and the dashes. Nicely done!
Sahk 2008-08-31 . chapter 1
This would be better with some more length~.
C.Gholy 2008-08-29 . chapter 1
Very powerful and short and sweet. I loved it
HurtMe 2008-08-21 . chapter 1
Ah, beautiful. This really touched me.
blackberrydream 2008-08-04 . chapter 1
Wow, that was beautiful. I wish it was longer because I feel like it has a lot of potential to be a great, intense, poignant story. I really hope this becomes something more.
lackluster 2008-03-13 . chapter 1
gah. this SHOULD be longer. i think if you expand on the idea, you'll really get something.

because right now, it's just a tease. and a really good one at that. love the ending.
Written 2008-03-03 . chapter 1
beautiful work, as always.
Alien M 2008-02-18 . chapter 1
Oh, very poetic and bittersweet. I really like it, nice work ^^

~IL2
kelsi bones 2008-02-18 . chapter 1
This is really cool =]
I know, that sounds kind of lame, but it is cool =P

The repetition of "i hate you" makes this so intense.

k.X
In the Rye 2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Hmn. It was interesting enough for me to want it to be longer.
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