this piece shows how poetry can transcend politics, push human experience to the front. I may not share your views but your language and imagery were so goddamn beautiful that I couldn't help but feel moved.

"the tilted hourgass with grains of time floating without purpose in a vacuum" was particularly evocative.

simply stunning. i look forward to reading more.

and thanks for putting me on your favorites list.

wow, i am almost cried. that was so incredible. i loved it. it's so going on my favorites list. you conveyed that in a way that i could have never thought of, never seen. such truth. women need to hear truth like this. they really do. then they wouldn't believe it's the white men trying to take away their freedom by telling them they can't have abortions. i can't critisize anything here. the words: beautiful & unique. the message: amazing. the effect: incredible.

you have talent. keep using it for God.

ps. here with the review marathon. check out the link in my profile if you're interested.

I'm pro life. But I liked it. The imagery was amazing.

Wow. Powerful. Great word choice. I'm mesmerized. I don't have much to say... Just, wow. Great job.

-stix-