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| Johannas mirror 2008-03-14 ch 1,  | abusesomething about this seems not finished but if you can imagine all the more beautiful for it raw and bleeding a little but crimson with possibility i love it |
| Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abusevery beautiful and deep...I like the imagery of the shattering heart ripping apart veins and the atomic bomb to the chest. |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseReally powerful piece... I especially love the second to last stanza and how you italicized that word in the last line.. the images are really awesome |
| nineteenstars 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusewow. very vivid and emotional. amazing. |
| purple x pen 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusevery powerful, nice. |