Reviews for Just An Ordinary Boy

laughter at the funeral 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abusewow. this is another nicely done haiku. simple yet paints something complicated. i would've wanted more play on the words though. but this is still good. p.s: this is really weird but i have another reflection of this poem in my piece "stories" i swear they both kind of have the same thing going on. kindly check it out. truly yours...
ten pts above average 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseyour amazing with haikus
Basara 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuse...there's something disturbing among the lines... nice...
doctor's diagnosis 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abusehonestly, haiku has become my new favorite form to read. every haiku writer on here is amazing, especially you, and they all write things i just get.
right2reality 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseLoved the last line! Just the use of 'I' was a perfect twist that made this haiku great. Sad... but great. Keep up the good work! -right2reality
painted.music 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abusekonnichi wa Oh, this is so painfully sad! There's no other word for it besides sad - so so so sad. :( He looked into HER eyes but said what I wanted to here. Poor, poor narrator. :( Zaijen -Shan-
purple x pen 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abusei can literally feel my heart being torn apart by this, its amazing how only three lines written by you can say so much. it holds a truth that so many can relate to and gets a powerful emotional response from the readers, amazing!
Ygg 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseNice twist in the end. This is a good poem, simple and direct.