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| Indirect Object 2008-02-18 ch 1,   | I quite liked it. The only thing I didn't like was the capitalization of every line, especially when 'slowly' wasn't capitalized but everything else was. |
| Zonne 2008-02-18 ch 1, | Very Nice. Says so much in few words and paints a clear image. |