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| striking matches 2/18/08 . chapter 1
"I don’t care about all the promises we made / I don’t care how hard the inside of your hands are... / a smile between your teeth... / I lost my soul between your legs"
Favorite lines, my dear. You are exquisite and daring and oh.
Just a helpful hint for poetry and whatnot. You can press the Shift Enter at the same time to get rid of the space between your lines. Makes it easier to read, flows better, and you get to use the spaces for artistic license. Awesome!
Thanks for reviewing me!