I've reviewed this on a previous account, totallyinspired, but never really gave it the credit it was due. I mean, even then I was mesmerised by it, maybe too much that I didn't put it into words. But this is amazing, I've never read anything quite so beautiful and never seen words flow so effortlessly and perfectly as it did here. To be honest, I think this is the best piece of writing I've ever read, so deep and yet so on the surface at the same time. Simply, it's going on my favourites, and I LOVE it :)

Wonderful.

Damn. That was a good story. You even got my eyes to tear up when he hesitated. You have an amazing talent don't stop.

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That was wonderful! I like how the story just flows... it's amazing!

That was amazing... the way the words flowed and the story wove itself together. It was beautiful. Going on my favorites!

That was lovely and sweet. I really liked it!

aww this is soo good, absolutely love it!

Bravo! I loved it, well done! ] I like how it's a story but there is the rhythm of poetry in it. Very well done.