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| Amaryllis Faye 2008-06-25 ch 1,  | abusethis just goes to prove what idiots boys can be. i mean seriously guys, if you love her, GO GET HER dammit. i think situations like this just shows that he doesnt love her enough to get her. |
| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abusewhy? But so cute! i hate situations like that but i loved this! |
| gulistanlik 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, poor guy. But seriously, how come they can never be together? Is it because she doesn't want to break her loyalty to her best friend? Well if that girl were a true friend, she'd see that she would be happy with him and would actually tell her to go right ahead. Congrats on a job well done, by the way. =D gulistanlik |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Short, yes, but are the emotions felt? Yes. Well-written despite its length, and I'm off to read the sequel (of sorts) now. (: I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (: |
| d666lisa 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseExcellent, cute and sad at the same time: bittersweet :) |
| mia5081 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was so sad. But I definitely loved the way you wrote it, with the him countering each point and everything. Great job! ~Mia |
| x3life 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseomg this was so good!! i read the other one too.. and they both fit so well together... ahh!! you needa write another one... where something happends and it doesnt just end here.. please? =) |
| found.eventually 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is really, really sweet. And I'm running out things to say, but you get my point. This is crazily sweet. |
| artistic dreamer 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abusethis is so cute! i want to find a guy like that! |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseAww! That is so sweet, yet so heartbreakingly sad at the very same time. Great job! |
| whispered enigma 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuseAww... |
| SparklingStar25 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI was wondering who is this 'she' in (2)...but really...that was some twist out there at the end...never expected that. |
| Cupid's Jinx 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseAw! Utterly adorabubble -x- |
| GrannyP 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, that was really intense! I liked how the points were kind of connected, like you just got a little hint of the whole story and you have to think to connect all the dots. But number 7 makes me wonder what "she" thought about it... very well written, in my opinion. |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusePretty. Each of the points made me both sigh and cringe =) XD I think it's perfect, apart from number 9, which didn't come across as strongly as the rest. Number 2 was confusing, until the last line, so it's god. Anyway, keep it up =D Much enjoyed! Moon's Poetess |