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JtheChosen1 2008-12-05 . chapter 2
very good story here! can't wait to see more from it, so keep up the good work!
Leah 2008-06-07 . chapter 2
Well, as you already know, I continue to adore Leo. He's just amazing. If only he wasn't fictional and homosexual. I would be on him like a fat boy on a cake. And I love how accepting his friends are. :)

I love how you compare Leo's parents by using who they voted for president. Lol.

How refreshing, man. Males who like Pearl Harbor. If only.

I really do love the name Max. I have no idea why though. Do you remember if we thought we were cool when we became freshmen? Because I don't think we did... I actually don't think I thought I was cool at all that year, haha.

I love how Robby doesn't even worry that Leo may be cheating on him. Kind of worrisome that he doesn't wonder if something bad happened to him, but I'll ignore that. Haha. It's so cute how Robby keeps his hair wavy for Leo & dresses in clothes he knows Leo likes on him.

I'm anticipating a new chapter for this soon, man. Don't disappoint me, please. :)
firestar267 2008-05-28 . chapter 2
I like Zac :)

This was really good! Well written, as usual. Really good character development, you can really see that robbys uncomfatable and how much they like each other

keep it up, cant wait for more!
Skyfeather2 2008-05-27 . chapter 2
I also think this is a really cute story and you shouldn't delete it. The characters are great and detailed and I love that neither Robby or Leo seem overly masculine or overly feminine. I love Natasha though- she's totally in control of the relationship and that's the way it should be ;-) I also like the differing reactions of family and friends you've got a wide range from complete acceptance to tolerance to extreme hatred. The range is nice to see because it allows you to show how the boys react to their peers reactions. So yeah, good story so far, don't delete it.
demented cookies 2008-05-27 . chapter 2
yay! another chapter! this one was cool. Natalie seemed a lot like me...really, really, really, really, really annoying.
plumblossom 2008-05-17 . chapter 1
This is he kind of story, I think, that begs to be told quickly. So I hope that the next chapter has lots of events in it!
I like Robby and Leo a lot.
Uadea U Ja 2008-02-28 . chapter 1
I really like the direction of this story. It would be sad if you discontinued it. I mean, it's not shakespeare or tolkein, but, honestly, who really needs them for a good story.

Victor
Back of Beyond 2008-02-19 . chapter 1
Sounds interesting, can't wait to read more. :] I hope you don't take this down, because that would just be plain unfair on us readers!
demented cookies 2008-02-18 . chapter 1
aww...that is really sweet. WRITE MORE! DON'T DELETE THIS STORY!
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