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| Daku 2008-06-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseAt last! The monocle meets slash! Sqwe! |
| tmelange1 2008-06-05 ch 3,  | abuseExcellent! I love these stories and the way they are related! Bravo! |
| tmelange1 2008-06-05 ch 2, | abuseExcellent story! Loved every bit. :) |
| tmelange1 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! What I really liked was the strong ending on Rae's characterization. At the beginning, I thought it strange that Rae could pull off such an aggressive personality as Hunter, but then you brought the characterization around at the end when he's with the prince and made it evident that the "Hunter" aggressiveness is natural. I appreciated that level of consistency. Bravo! |
| Curb Crasher 2008-03-10 ch 3, | abuseI liked these stories, but that last line was especially lovely. Thank you for writing! |
| i-see-faeries 2008-03-06 ch 3, | abuseCute, very cute. The characters are hard to identify with, but that could just be me. Otherwise, I love it. |
| Lac3d w1th p01s0n 2008-02-28 ch 3, | abuseI really admire how much work you put into each of your stories for they truly are a work of art. Even though you can figure out what's going to happen and this and that, it's still an entrancing read. That is a grand feat in and of itself. Amazing job! L0v3, p0!s0n |
| nonaccount 2008-02-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseLoved it! Great line, "He was fed a startled gasp,". I must say that chapters one and three are my favorite. So, so good! |
| nonaccount 2008-02-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseCute. I'm really enjoying this series of connected oneshots. :) |
| nonaccount 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely adore it! I love the love-hate relationship between Benedict and Rae - you portrayed it perfectly. One thing that was a little confusing was the unclear transitions from Benedict to Rae. I don't know if it's just me or others might benefit from - breaks or something. Anyway, it was only slightly distracting in such a wonderful story. Thanks! |
| x-princessa-temnoti-x 2008-02-21 ch 3, | abuseAgh. I'm supposed to be doing HOMEWORK right now. Obviously, that's not happening... Ironically, my homework at the moment is Bible... |
| Esquirella 2008-02-21 ch 3, | abuseI loved all three chapters! These characters were wonderfully intriguing and endearing! |
| Fei 2008-02-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseI had to review because I was so gleefully happy to see my inbox filled with notifications of your new stories and I so adore reading everything you've written. The way that you write romance - perfect. You draw the reader in, have them fall in love with the characters and then deliver the happy ending in such a gorgeous perfectly fitting manner. I should have reviewed each chapter, but when I start reading I don't want to stop. I can't wait to read more from you! |
| Ubiquitous Muffin Smuggler 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abuseI love you! I love you partly because unlike the fairy tales you have written before, you didn't tease us nearly as much with the romance between the characters. And I love you for creating well-written fiction that is always enjoyable to read. I'm going to treasure these short stories for a long time, and I hope you keep writing them. |
| Aeshtarai 2008-02-19 ch 3, | abusegreat story! |