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WithoutException
2008-09-05
ch 1,
I really like this one too! It seems you have a thing for somewhat "gender confused" nicknames, which is cool. I really like "Will" for Wilma, though. I haven't heard that one before.

I really like this so far -- Mike is really funny, and I completely empathize with the non-athletic PE thing. I hated PE. And I had a sexist gym teacher (who was also homophobic, but so was everyone else in my high school...). This is a great start, please continue!!
Shadowed and Shattered
2008-02-19
ch 1,
I loved this chapter. I think you did a really good job of introducing Will, and Mike seems really funny. I wish I'd read this chapter before I was finished with gym. :D
I Quoth Nevermore
2008-02-18
ch 1,
Brilliant. It's so realistic. I'm not quite sure if Mike is the love interest in the story, or the actual love interest will be revealed in the next chapter. Anyways, update soon!
ai-08
2008-02-18
ch 1,
saw this on fictionwriters on lj.

i love mike. he's such an oddball XD
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