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| friend 49 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abuseVeryveryvery true. Good stuff! |
| Lulu Jones 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseKellybear's review said: Wow. Just, wow. That really captured how I feel 24/7. Well done, I loved it. :) I feel exactly the same way. Most of my friends are good looking(I don't mean that in a bragging or self depreciating sort of way), and then there's me. It's not that I don't find myself attractive its just that what happend to the oblivious girl in you story never really happens to me. What happens to me is what happens to the girl telling the story. ARG! But anyway I loove this!! It's wonderful. |
| CK Shorty 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseLiked it. Really intense, original, and realistic. :O) |
| d666lisa 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI think this is probably the most realistic stories I've read on Fiction Press, very original and very well written :-) |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I've never seen this view point before, but it's very interesting. This was well-written, of course, and I liked it, but it ends a lot darker than I expected. Oh, and you wrote "jealously" but I think you might've meant "jealousy." A fantastic one-shot and addition to our c2 from woodstock1969. |
| sleepiedreamer 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abusethat was god... i don't think i could ever write like that. the most i could do is write like a 5th grader hahas |
| Operationiva 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseDark. But we all need a pinch of darkness in our lives! ^-^Going to my favorites! Operationiva |
| ellebelle1992 2008-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseVERY GOOD! i love how original this one shot is. i havent ever read anything like it. it's also SO real! i have felt this way TONZ of times and i can tell when my friends are sorta feeling this way torwards me...anyway GOOD JOB! |
| found.eventually 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is something totally different, but I loved it. The writing style, the way you portrayed the jealousy in the characters and oblivion in the other girl, the flow of the short essay. A favourite! :) |
| emerald 2008-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, intense. Fine, I have felt that nasty jealousy before. But don't you think you exaggerated just a little? But that's part of what makes it good writing. |
| substitute angel 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is short, but good. I'm glad you decided to post it up. I like the different style; it's different and refreshing. Good work. Cheers Blue Calico |
| Sally Can Wait 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, jealous stalker, much? XD I thought it was interesting, though. It's totally something that everybody can relate to, whether or not they'd like to admit it. -Sally :3 |
| The Cat Died Nobly 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. Written with an underlying dark tone, you really executed this well. We've all felt that, seen that, been there. I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this. Well done! |
| zanessa1215 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good! |
| Kellybear 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just, wow. That really captured how I feel 24/7. Well done, I loved it. :) |