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Reviews For: Question to Brother

kloun mannequin
2008-03-24
ch 1,
I like this part:

lemon juice on
the bed, or acidic
...

the flow is so natural, its a nice poem.
Lady Fingers
2008-03-01
ch 1,
i've got love seeping into your veins
and for every word you bleed
i will
like
what?
like coconuts!
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