i love it.
very descriptive,
& damn. it's just good.

Well it's definitely very good. The first chapter dragged me right in. You really made Jamie a character I could admire but then feel bad for and pity at the same time. Taking care of her younger sister like that showed that even though she's stubborn and mean she still has feelings for someone else and actually loves her sister. The fact that she's such a bitch to everyone shows that she's so self conscience and perhaps afraid to let any one get too close and know any of her harmful secrets. Or at least that's what I got out of it. I'm very excited to read the next chapter; your writing skills are amazing.