Reviews for Transcendental - FictionPress.com

Basara 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abusesymbolism mixed in other looking branched off sentences... both relate the other, without the other... the 'lizard' won't be defined... nice...
no.peace.los.angeles 2008-02-23 ch 1,	abuseVery strange haiku. I do like it, but I don't think I understand it entirely, either. Perhaps that's the point - transcendental. Either way, it's beautiful. Keep writing! :)
Ygg 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuseWow this is pretty intangible in its possible meanings, perhaps a bit too intangible :) But I like the contrast between both images, with the image of the lizards being a strange concretion of the first line. It's original to be sure, but I don't really feel a way to put my finger on its meaning. Nice work!
doctor's diagnosis 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abusei don't get it. i'm sure there's something in there that means something to you, but i just feel confused. not always a terrible thing, but in a such short form, one confusing thing throw off the whole poem.
Ryan Schiff 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseI'm not sure how I feel about the way you just enjambed the lines for no reason, other than to keep the meter of the poem. Furthermore, I really don't get the image of this Haiku as the two sentences seems scattered and unrelated.