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| Twilight Starr 2008-07-10 ch 1,  | abuseCute story. ^^ I liked the comment about how Lillie didn't lie about popularity and the ending line. Nice work. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseOdd how I added this story to my favorites yet never submitted a review...I blame my computer. I like this because it's not a cliche. Typical popular girl falls for typical popular guy. This is the sort of thing that we need to see more often. You get cool points for writing something like this lol. |
| beaneyes30 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseloved it! you should really make a longer story out of it. |
| fatbird33 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseohh this is so fantastic! i love the line: As one of the most popular girls in school, Lilly had an obligation to date jocks and only jocks. But that wasn’t what she wanted. and the ending was just flawless. wonderful! |
| twilove 2008-02-21 ch 1, | abuseI loved, although the ending was a tid bit cheesy, BUT you do write very well, you really do. I still liked it though! |
| writing.life.2.4 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseaw! that was UNBELIEVABLY cute. it really was. i luv michael! (but that's probably because i luv nerds) lol great one shot! this mite actually make a good story too about how she has to deal with people making fun of her for dating a nerd, and jealous guys coming up to Michael saying to step back. you know? anyway, awesome one shot and great job! |
| quiet-zone 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseCute story. Nice use of details. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| Thomicas 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseA very cute and light story! The theme isn't really very original, but still you manage to make it original in your own way; very good! |