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BlueAki 2009-10-09 . chapter 8
OMG! why did he do that? I thought he loved her
BlueAki 2009-10-09 . chapter 7
uh oh, i think she's pregnant
BlueAki 2009-10-09 . chapter 2
I live this story. Its interesting. I just think they became friends to easily. Like the secret service didn't need to investigate her? What does his dad think about them hanging out? I love when ken says "...I have no time, and frankly no energy to worry about abducting you. My only concern is abducting your heart.” I think that was very cute.
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2009-07-09 . chapter 4
Aww, he is so amazingly loving and supportive. Unless he has us all fooled O_o wouldn't that be a shame. Ugh, I actually have cleaning to do and yet I cannot do it, I remain glued to this seat. Boy, each chapter makes me want to read the next chapter. Damn it.

She cuts, huh. Man...
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2009-07-09 . chapter 3
Okay, so I might be a tad bit confused right now. Did she and Ken sleep together - and not in the way that they were in a bed, asleep together? Oh man, again with my music influencing me, eh. Anyway, God, I want to know what did or did not happen. I have to read on then.

Fantastic story by the way.

Toodles
XxInDreamsWeRestxX 2009-07-09 . chapter 2
So I become more and more in love with this with every chapter I read. Love Ken, he's so...classic! And for some reason, and I haven't any clue as to what that reason is, I was listening to Burning Up when this was playing and it seemed fitting in my mind, lol. I know it doesn't fit, but it did at the time.

Now I'm rambling.

Kudos&Love,Peace
citablebony 2009-03-18 . chapter 8
I really liked this hopefully you'll be able to update this
-YourShoesDon'tFit- 2008-11-29 . chapter 2
yo. your storys hella god.
im only on chap 2 tho. tehe. oh well. :]
i absolutley posotutley love paramore. GOD.
my heart is one of their best, by far. tho...
that's talking about the big G-O-D not a guy.
lotso people confuse it tho, so no big.
uh, uh, erm? i swear you'd get more reviews tho if you ya kno, cut the BWWM out of the summary. more ppl would feel it was directed towards them and idk, they'd be more drawn but hey, do whatcha like. i just feel like that.

its great.
Mel.
XxPunkbrat88xX 2008-11-29 . chapter 8
I just started reading this story and I am in love! I realized that you haven't updated in a while, but I am hoping that this review will trigger some creative juices b/c I need an update!

I need to know if she tells him and what will happen next! PLEASE update soon!
xXblackbloodroseXx 2008-11-22 . chapter 8
aw thats sad, why the heck would he do that. ba*tard.
gr
xoxoxoxo
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love the story other than the fact that he cheated. XD
MeridianDreams 2008-10-26 . chapter 8
DANG IT! DANG IT! DANG IT!

Why do guys always do bonehead things when they have NO idea what is going on? Like seriously, why didn't Ken get his happy self up and go to Keila and make her tell him what was up?! And now he has gone and slept with this chick. And this chick has the nerve to call Keila and rub it in her face.

What happened to that Ken from the last chapter? What happened to the Ken that was ready to fight for everything he and Keila stood for? Ugh, he gets paranoid and can't keep his emotions in check. It sounds like he has more of a problem than Keila. OH! I am just too hot and upset with him. He better do some SERIOUS groveling when it comes to getting back in Keila's good graces.

And Keila. Thank goodness she has Marie by her side b/c Keila almost got a foot in the butt from me if she was going to keep this baby a secret from Ken. That is one thing that amazes me. Women claim they can do whatever they want with their bodies when it comes to a child but a woman cannot make a baby by herself. The man is just as important as the woman when it comes to creating a life. Ok, I am stepping off my soapbox now, lol.

Please, please, PLEASE fix this b/c I am presently cutting a side eye at Ken and Keila and I don't like to be mad at characters I love. Please and thank you, lol.
Writing4Eternity 2008-10-22 . chapter 8
um...
grumpirah 2008-10-18 . chapter 8
Ken needs his butt beat for stupidity and this Jenny trick just needs a beat down period for being the bold ** she is. And I'm hoping Ken's sister will help with both activities.
AfterTheRainIsGone 2008-10-14 . chapter 8
Omg! Of all the times Ken would at like a jerk, it would be right before Keila tells him that she's pregnant. That was pretty stupid. Also, I have to sat kudos to Marie for being the platform of common sense in this chapter. But then again, it is understandable why Keila is having a nervous breakdown. Sweet chapter! Patiently awaiting the next.
Happy Writing!
JusticeWriter 2008-10-14 . chapter 8
m'kay...
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