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| Car Crash Prettyxx 2008-04-24 ch 5,  | abuseJANELLE. This is a pretty good read. I kept on waiting for him & Laken to talk about something a little bit more important but I am glad that Harlan seems to be thinking for himself a little as well. I do like how you've descrived Laken & Harlan, as out of the ordinary and with pretty specific details about their looks and clothing choices (though you really seem to like blonde hair). :] Keep it up. I'll keep reading. |
| Onia Black 2008-04-24 ch 5, | abusehaha his step mom is totally preggo and i'm excited to see what happens with laken update soon =D |
| BlackFire101 2008-04-24 ch 5, | abuseI don't know why I didn't review this story earlier. It's awesome, I think that Ashley is pregnant, that would explain her anger issues. Anyway, I hope you update soon. |
| Sara 2008-04-22 ch 5, anon. | abuseHmm...good chapter. I'm guessing the next one will be rather interesting. =] |
| Onia Black 2008-04-21 ch 4, | abusewow that was a good chapter =D |
| Ama-sk8 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abusevery interesting, skateboarding stories always catch my attention, lol. Because its awesome like this story so far! |
| downbythebeardedbarley000 2008-04-06 ch 3, | abusethis is interesting more soon? |
| iamFRESH.TO.DEATH 2008-04-06 ch 3, | abuseThis is interesting. Keep updating. I want to learn more about Laken. And if Harlan and Laken ever get together. Which they will I'm sure. =] |
| Onia Black 2008-04-06 ch 3, | abusei bet she's that chick's sister, right? lmao good chapter, update soon |
| lozzy 2008-03-02 ch 2, anon. | abusethis is really good! i can't wait to read more. i love the characters, especially harlan (and i can't wait to learn more about laken). p.s this is lozzy_babe06 from lj, btw xD |
| HotFudgeSundae 2008-03-01 ch 2, | abuseI agree with Onia Black. HE NEEDS TO MARRY HER! haha I don't really like his friends though, they sound kinda mean.. |
| Onia Black 2008-03-01 ch 2, | abusewow tiffany wants to make me throw up. and oh he most totally must marry red head weird chick. ITS DECIDED. K? OKAY. |
| HotFudgeSundae 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! I think its also hilarious. I love how he has to have a hot pink cast. Out of all the colors hot pink. haha. Anyway, I really like this, and I can't wait for more! |
| Onia Black 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseAh I like this story. Good concept, good characters. Keep up the good work :) |