Haha. Okay, at least it's hot pink and not baby pink. I mean, hot pink is reasonable. Anyway... I'm curious to find out who the red-head girl is. She seems to be of some importance to the story or maybe I'm just getting ahead of myself.

brittney.

Meh! Write more! I MUST know what happens! By the way, if you couldn't tell already, I LOVE IT!

This was quite a nice story to read.

I liked the characters they were quite individualistic and at the same time they seemed real.

I quite liked the flow of the story so far too. Hopefully you could update it? I know it's a long shot seeing as you last update 5 months ago but I just thought maybe I'd ask.

Any ways nice writing and keep it up .:)

i'm digging the story so far...harlan seems totally cool cant say the same about charlie though and what's the deal with laken...throw some more chapters my way, cant wait to find out what happens next.

JANELLE.
This is a pretty good read. I kept on waiting for him & Laken to talk about something a little bit more important but I am glad that Harlan seems to be thinking for himself a little as well.

I do like how you've descrived Laken & Harlan, as out of the ordinary and with pretty specific details about their looks and clothing choices (though you really seem to like blonde hair). :]

Keep it up. I'll keep reading.

haha his step mom is totally preggo
and i'm excited to see what happens with laken
update soon =D

I don't know why I didn't review this story earlier. It's awesome, I think that Ashley is pregnant, that would explain her anger issues. Anyway, I hope you update soon.

Hmm...good chapter.
I'm guessing the next one will be rather interesting.
=]

wow that was a good chapter =D

very interesting, skateboarding stories always catch my attention, lol. Because its awesome like this story so far!

this is interesting
more soon?

This is interesting.
Keep updating.
I want to learn more about Laken.
And if Harlan and Laken ever get together.
Which they will I'm sure.
=]

i bet she's that chick's sister, right?
lmao good chapter, update soon

this is really good! i can't wait to read more. i love the characters, especially harlan (and i can't wait to learn more about laken).

p.s this is lozzy_babe06 from lj, btw xD

I agree with Onia Black. HE NEEDS TO MARRY HER!
haha
I don't really like his friends though, they sound kinda mean..