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Silly Little Songwriter 2009-10-31 . chapter 7
Okay...
I love your stories and all it's just...

Your leading guys are kind of jerks, yeah? Not all, just most. They do stupid stuff and then just expect to be forgiven because they kiss the girl and are all good looking.

Your girls don't really make them work for it, even though sometimes they do really shitty things. And I don't think any of them truly say sorry. And the ex one, with Cameron? If he loves her so much and didn't want her taken of life support, why did he break up with her? I just don't get it.

I do love your stories, truly, I just think sometimes you rush to the conclusion too fast without properly explaining.
Brenna
ir0nna 2009-10-20 . chapter 1
the ending was HILARIOUS.
enough said. :D
keeping the moon 2009-04-16 . chapter 2
Your writing is brilliant. I take my hat off to you.
White Rose Blossom 2008-12-20 . chapter 8
Wow, that would be so awkward! (especially the mom and priest thing, wow, hah)
But it was very cute/adorable :)
Great job!
-Aria
LondonLi 2008-12-15 . chapter 8
I usually love this collection, but this one is so random. I mean, why was he marrying her mom, just to dump her at the last second. I think that needs a little more extrapolation. I love the girl, though.
Green Eyed Angel 2008-12-13 . chapter 8
That was... strange. Esoecially the mother's character. But guess what? I lurved it!
Ck90 2008-12-13 . chapter 8
If that were to happen in real life, it would totally suck! But anyway I love the update... very sweet!
N.M.E 2008-12-13 . chapter 8
I LOVE ALL THESE ONE-SHOTS! I'm crazy about them! Although, this one was a little weird. But it ended well! I LOVED THE MOVIE! It was amazing! You'll love it if you really love Twilight.

P.S. Sorry if I sound a bit too hyper-active. Its the caffeine!
Amphityonis 2008-12-12 . chapter 8
few things...ok...

1. i hate you!!
2. I wanna see twilight!!
3. this is a amazing!
4. Why cant i do that!
5. it would be fun
6. i love the stroy. the whole plot is good. i wish i could so some tinhg like this. it would be totally against me but never mind.

OCD
Dominican Lady 2008-12-12 . chapter 8
Ok the stories were amazing each in their own way... But more importantly, GG is amazing-er and i swear that Chuck looks hot, all mad and rebel-ish and I do feel bad for Blaire because for the 1st time she opens up and then BAM! Chuck doesn't want her. I think it is super unfair for them to just be like the next episode is Jan 5th cause every monday I expect to see a new ep. so I will be VERY disappointed.

You know you love me

XOXO

GG and DL
Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2008-12-12 . chapter 8
That was weird, no offense. I mean...seriously. How unlikely. He waited until THEN! And how the hell did the mom get over it so fast? And why was he going to marry the mom in the first place?? Confusing confusing...good try though. :)
LoveSupernaturally 2008-12-12 . chapter 8
dude... who's your daddy * wink wink * cute but not sure if i like it as much as the others in the series. Seriously who falls in love with your mothers groom who's barely your age. What kind of mother lets that happen.
Jayjack 2008-12-12 . chapter 8
but Chuck did come but. yet he of course left again :'(
i love him(Chuck) he's soo hott. :D
i wish there was a kid at my school that looked like him but for all my wishing sadly there isn't.

Story-interesting very. a little strange. but good.

i still haven't seen Twilight but i didn't even get through the whole book it bored me so i stopped when i was almost done. oh well. i'll still go and watch it though.
blackbubbleblue 2008-12-12 . chapter 8
Hey ape very nice one shot I think that woked out well. And so can't wait to think tomorow we will be watching twilight. oh has morgan said if she'll be able to come?
FunkyObsessed 2008-12-09 . chapter 7
okay, now i feel guilty...
i should've reviewed EVERY chapter!
BUT I COULDN'T HELP IT! i just couldn't stop reading your one-shots long enough to write a review :(
but that's ONLY cuz they were so good...like seriously, i ♥ one-shots, so this was awesome for me to read!
very very VERY good writing :)
oh, and you're welcome for the ♥
~DixieAusten
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