Reviews for Too close for comfort

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Kayla 2008-07-19 ch 12, anon.	abuseI love this chapter. I was very happy when I saw that you updated this story. And no I don't have a Shane. I know one. As always keep up the good work.
under the bed 2008-06-10 ch 12,	abuseOoh, vicious. Sawyer didn't deserve that (or did I miss something? Dunno). Which part of your foot did you break?
iluv2lol 2008-06-09 ch 12, anon.	abusei feel kind of bad for shane he is afraid to let people in so it's kind of sad i also feel bad because it's obvious he's in love with her, but he just made it difficult to actually getting together with her because of the whole friend thing.. lol update soon!
Izzy Iccey 2008-05-21 ch 11,	abusePlz update soon
WriterGurl123 2008-05-20 ch 11,	abuseI want them to kiss again!
Kayla 2008-05-20 ch 11, anon.	abuseI like Shane. He is so amusing especially when he is jealous. So I really can’t wait to read your next chapters. Actually Shane has a very similar personality with a guy I knew. I like how he is keeping his feelings to himself (although if you are the girl liking him, you hate the fact that you don’t understand him most of the time). It would be very exciting to see Lyra’s actions and her tries to get to know him better. Shane is so different than the rest of his brothers and more quiet, like a mystery waiting for Lyra to discover. And everyone knows Lyra loves mysteries (correct me if I‘m wrong). Again, keep up the great work.
EvErY rOsE hAs ItS tHoRnS 2008-05-20 ch 11,	abuseWow. That was such a good chapter.I love Shane and Lyra's realashonship, there so cute! (Especilly Shane, but he's cute all the time ;D.)I love seeing them trying to deny there feelings. Update soon, EvErY rOsE hAs ItS tHoRnS x
iluv2lol 2008-05-17 ch 10, anon.	abuseaw deep down Shane's a real sweetheart lol it wasn't really confusing, actually for me it cleared up some questions that i had! anywho update soon!
Never.Ending.Nightmare 2008-05-16 ch 10,	abuseGreat story! I love it! I'm absolutely addicted. Love the characters. So Lyra and Shane are ending up together right? Well anyway I can't wait for more. Please update as soon as you can! Thanks.
Kayla 2008-05-16 ch 10, anon.	abuseI don't think this chapter is weird or confusing. In my opinion it is a nice change to see Shane's POV. I like this chapter and the way you described his emotions. I really like the plot and the characters. You've done a great work!
May 2008-05-16 ch 10, anon.	abuseOh... this is a good long chapter. Anyhow... I am excited to know how Shane is feeling... gosh... I can't wait until he takes control of his feeling and make her his.. hahaha... .lol... I just love it when people don't realize what they have in front of them until it is almost too late... but I have a feeling that she'll knock him to the point of no return and he'll somehow become her slavelover... I just love his macho-ness... he's quiet, sexy and HOT HOT HOT... Gosh... I hope to see some action soon... maybe getting him so jealous or ** off that he just takes it out with a hot passinate kiss... oh... gosh.. I will be waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for replying... makes me happy that you know there are many people out here reading your story.
lilhelplessaznwithabigheart 2008-05-16 ch 10,	abusecool! loved it...gotta do hw, so this review is gonna be pretty short. hehehs
LittleCook2008 2008-05-16 ch 10,	abuseHey!! totally awesome chapter! But some of the wording was weird at the start, and it was slightly confusing but all straightened out eventually!! It did give insight into the characters and how they appear to others aswell. Lindsay is a total ** by the way! hate her! love the story !
lilhelplessaznwithabigheart 2008-05-16 ch 9,	abuseaww...shane is jealous of harry! harry seems like such a great friend to have. tehes
svmgeleta 2008-05-16 ch 10,	abusei liked how you changed the POV...there was some wrong verb usage and some other words wrong but other than that it was okay. :) PLEAsE UPATE SOON!

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